my first poem

created by elmochick

(thing) by ril (7.7 mon) (print) ? (I like it!) Thu Jul 20 2000 at 13:45:49

nothing to be seen
the darkness covers all
eyelids heavy now
i hear a distant call

the pain has disappeared
the emptiness will fade
all words you spoke are lost
now gone, the hurt you made

I find it strange I felt these things when I was so young, I was only 13. My first poem taught me something; it's easier to write when you're miserable.

The Mask	the word eat he	Love poem from the monsters under my bed	Things to Do in Denver When You're Dead
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Teflon	Poem	Death	Luke
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